Nic ([info]paranoidangel42) wrote in [info]farscapefriday,

Earliest Memories

Since I missed it the first time round, here's 100 words for the earliest memories challenge.

Stars

I remember the stars. There were always stars around me. It was a little scary at first - there were so many, in so big a space, that I was so small in comparison. But everything was okay because my mother was there.

Then my mother left me.

There were big rocks all around me - asteroids they were called - but I couldn't see the stars. I wanted to follow my mother but Crais stopped me. He helped me, he calmed me, I felt safe when he was with me.

And then I didn't need my mother any more.

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[info]kazbaby

June 28 2003, 10:25:32 UTC 8 years ago

This was good..and a little sad as well. I guess I'm on a Talyn sympathy kick after watching IYYY the other night.

[info]njborba

June 28 2003, 16:54:37 UTC 8 years ago

That was a lovely look into poor Talyn's earliest memories, nice job :D

[info]reblog

June 28 2003, 18:28:45 UTC 8 years ago

haha, i like that. i was so going baby pilot for the first bit. but maybe i'm just dense *g*

[info]paranoidangel42

June 29 2003, 07:14:38 UTC 8 years ago

Thank you all for commentating. There is something nicely refreshing about writing a bit of baby language!

[info]elishavah

June 29 2003, 08:16:05 UTC 8 years ago

Aw. We need more Talyn and Moya fic.

[info]paranoidangel42

June 29 2003, 11:11:26 UTC 8 years ago

We do indeed!
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